Pitch 7- feedback

After presenting our pitch we were told to improve it we need to think of a small narrative to put in the video to keep it from being boring. We were also told that we need to design a practice website which will represent what ours will look like. We have now done that and used images of Paramore as we are doing a Paramore song for our video and we also didn't have any of our own images to use. We were also told that we need to plan our costumes more as we didn't really have much ideas of what our actors  would wear during the video.